
I went fishing with my Mum and Dad. First we hooked the boat off my Dad's truck unit. We started up the boat. We went fast. A baby shark was following us and it gave us a big fright. We caught five snappers and the seagulls ate some of our fish. We had four snappers left. We took them home and made homemade fish and chips, which were very nice.

Te Aihe Tama, what an excellent piece of writing. Keep it up. Good short sentences using capital letters and fullstops. You worked really hard on this true fishing story.
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I am so proud of this wonderful piece of writing Te Aihe Tama. You have worked very hard with Matua Tom to produce your fishing story. Fabulous work!
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Hi Te Aihe Tama!
ReplyDeleteWhat an awesome piece of writing :) Keep up the good work! I bet your fresh fish and chips were delicious! You just made me hungry haha
Hi Teaihetama i like your work that you did on the blog.Keep up the good work (:
ReplyDeleteHi TeAihetama your work Is cool. Keep up the good work. LEVI
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