"A2 ROCKS"

"A2 ROCKS"
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Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Characterisation of my Sister Mary by Elsie

My sister Mary has soft, creamy skin, with a little extra fake tanning on her arms and legs.Her long, chestnut brown hair, ripples like the waves on a lake. Her eyes are full of mischievous cheek, and sparkle and gleam like diamonds in the sunlight. Her lashes are long and black, like a midnight sky. Her nails are pearly white and forever clean. Her smile is big and joyous, like the face of a clown.

Mary has a fantastic sense of style, and she enjoys cutting old clothes up, and turning them into new, funky fashions.

Mary can be as ferocious as a lion, the way she argues and fights. She can be as cheeky as a spider monkey, and as beautiful and loving as a new born lamb. She is gentle and kind, and beautiful inside and out.

Mary is special to me, because she can lighten any burden on heart, with a mere glance or wink. I feel very protective of her, which sometimes scares me, because in a normal day, we exchange about two words with each other, unless we are having a heated argument. We communicate with our eyes and hearts.

Mary is a special and wonderful person, and I know I am lucky to have her as a sister. I don't know about you, but I think she's one of the most wonderful people I know.

By Elsie A2

3 comments:

  1. Elsie you are a gifted writer. Your characterisation about Mary really moved me. You have a way with words that is very touching. Absolutely love this piece of writing.

    Mrs Norton :)

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  2. Hi Elsie!
    Wow!! what a beautiful characterisation of your sister :) You are a very gifted writer!
    Keep it up

    Hope

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  3. Hello Elsie mousie Morgan here.
    Your story was so great that I think one day you will be a famous author.

    From Morgan =]=]

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